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The snowflakes fall in slow motion.
One reaches down to kiss my cheek.
I close my eyes, shivering.
It feels like you.
Like your touch. Your lips on my skin.
A tingling shoots up my spine.
I can feel your arms around me.
Hear your whisper in my ear.
I stare at the snow.
Frozen in time.
I pull you closer to me, and meet your lips.
Coaxing heat from you, demanding your warmth, your heart, your everything.
Suddenly the snowflakes touch me again.
I am awakened. Forced back to my harsh, cruel reality.
My world that is now without you. Without us.
Without everything....
Just something I thought of walking in the snowwww! Hope you all enjoy!!
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jaylond17 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
amazing i love it i really felt it and thats not easy to occomplish
at first i was touch i felt warm, content even, when you awaken i felt the heartbreaken it left me empty
hurt inside

amazing
and you integrated my fav movie into it

great job do some more!!!!
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kassylee Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
:love: W..wow! I am sooo extremely flattered! I don't know what to say...I thought it was one of my weaker pieces..Thank you again! :heart:
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jaylond17 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
it seems as though thats how it goes my weakest seem to be everyone elses favorites
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kassylee Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2011
haha! SO weird!!
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jaylond17 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
i know right?
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kassylee Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
:P Totally!
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jaylond17 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
i wonder why that is
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kassylee Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
Idk...Hmmm~
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Razor13 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautiful. I love pieces like this.
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
Thank you! I'm glad you do... :meow:
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Razor13 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome.
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KatMelody Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Snowflakes *smiles and sighs* This makes me want to go out just to feel their falling froze touch. thanks hun, I liked this one.
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
Glad you liked it! I love the snowwww!! :meow:
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KatMelody Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Forgot to say, def felt the loneliness in this piece. that bitter ache for a once blissful memory but now left w/ nothing. Like nothing but the whiteness of the snow around u. I kno this feeling. so thanks, can relate *smiles*
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
SNOW=YAY..... Lonely = :(.... AND WHERE'S MY DAMNED GORE!!!!!!!
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
I'm sorry!! D: I..I..Itll get done... >.<
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lmao you better... the Goddesss is not pleased XD
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
All in good time... XD
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
*laughs* take your time
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florencegilbert Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very sad... :iconsniffplz:
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
No no! Please don't cry!! Its okayyy!! :glomp:
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florencegilbert Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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