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Sit and ponder, by the lake
The path that I'm destined to take...

It's times like these I never know,
Which direction I should go

Dear Azrael, Take my hand
Show me to the promised land

A world of dreams, and pastry creams
Of love and lust, and pixie dust

I close my eyes and dream of you
And all the things that we might do

Dearest Angels, Hear my plee
I beg of you, Come rescue me...
Azrael is my Archangel, and the angel of Death.. I'm feeling a little lost... So... I hope he can help me...
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I have some bad news for you. We have no destined paths. We have to make our own paths. But the closest we can come to having a destined path is to keep all paths opened up before us so we can try and figure out which one suits us best. To figure that out, we must challenge ourselves and question ourselves constantly until we stumble upon the path that clicks within us. That is the path we are "destined" to take, though it really just means that that is the path that suits us best, but we could always end up on a path besides that one if we just accept one instead of using challenges and questions to determine how right it is for us. And even if this might seem overwhelming and daunting, and it is a times, just live your life challenging everything you think and believe until it fits in your life the way it is meant to. I'm still figuring my life out.

Other than that random rant, this is a great piece. I like it.
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
I think we do.. But what we choose to do with what cards we get is up to us... thank you!
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Astralnature Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no prob
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LadyNitaDarKness Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i love thisthe rythm is perfect and the sceme suits this short, sweet pice beautifully!
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
Thank you! :)
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Kitshunette Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Seriously you made me like poetry ~ :iconiloveitplz:

* couldn't stand a single rhyme because of awful literature teachers *
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
:la: I'm SOO happy!! That makes me feel amazingly special!! :love:
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Ayu-Dev Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this... nicely done :D sounds sad in a way... was that intentional?
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kassylee Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
Um..Not really.. hehe
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BASbird Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011  Student General Artist
Jeez Kassia, you didn't have to write a poem for me, you could have just talked to me.

;)
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